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Fire Exploding Out Of A Shooting Star


When I look at a red, red rose,

I see a shooting star
above the wilderness.

When the rose begins to bloom,

The shooting star begins to explode.

But when it explodes, It becomes
a red, red, rose.

— Cristina Breitenstein, Grade 5
Endeavour Elementary School
Mukilteo, Washington

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