Teacher Joan Fiset asked
her seniors to loupe study an object, and as usual, write 10 things
it reminded them of; then choose one line and list it alone on a
page, followed by a prose memoir that arose from the association. The
following is a memoir from this assignment:
Seed Pods
The young birds cry for their mother
The cries, I heard them, wondering how long they had been calling
before I became aware. The leaves were in piles. Dad let me ride
in the trailer. Me with my pitchfork bigger than I would ever
be. The day had the warmth that only fall days can have, the
smell of harvests and wet grass. As I had first noticed the birds
call, I realized they had stopped. Mom had come with breakfast.
— Andrew Holmberg, Grade 12
Woodinville High School
Woodinville, Washington
[memoir based on loupe/analogy
work with a sweet gum seed pod]
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