| Teacher Joan Fiset asked
            her seniors to loupe study an object, and as usual, write 10 things
            it reminded them of; then choose one line and list it alone on a
            page, followed by a prose memoir that arose from the association.  The
            following is a memoir from this assignment:
 
            
              
                
                  Seed Pods The young birds cry for their mother
 The cries, I heard them, wondering how long they had been calling
                before I became aware. The leaves were in piles. Dad let me ride
                in the trailer. Me with my pitchfork bigger than I would ever
                be. The day had the warmth that only fall days can have, the
                smell of harvests and wet grass. As I had first noticed the birds
                call, I realized they had stopped. Mom had come with breakfast.
 
                — Andrew Holmberg, Grade 12Woodinville High School
 Woodinville, Washington
 [memoir based on loupe/analogy
                  work with a sweet gum seed pod]
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